Title – Mother of Valor
Author – Gary Corbin
Genre – Crime Thriller
Word Count - 105,000
Rating – Four stars out of Five
No. 53 - 2022
Posted 12/18/2022
My Impressions: Complex plot, intense, highly emotional.
Main Characters:
Valorie Dawes – Rookie policewoman
Gil Kryzinski – Police Sergeant, Val’s boyfriend
Maggi McCloskey- Valorie’s whacko mother
The story is set in the East Coast city of Clayton. Rookie policewoman Valorie Dawes has been involved in three shooting incidents in her first year and is restricted from carrying a firearm by the department shrink. Her boyfriend, Gil, is recuperating from a gunshot wound and is just returning to limited duty.
Val was raped by a family friend when she was twelve and has intimacy issues that impede her relationship with Gil. She doesn’t like to be touched. Her father is a weak recovering alcoholic, her brother is a weak liberal, and her mother ran off with and married the man who raped her. Not a typical healthy family environment for a young girl to grow up in.
Maggi and her husband are extreme right wing antigovernment fanatics who plan a violent, murderous, attack in Clayton on the Fourth of July.
When Maggi comes back to town to implement her nefarious act, Valorie learns she has a nine-year-old brother from the relationship of Maggi with Val’s rapist. During this time, I felt some of Val’s actions were too contrived in order to advance the plot. But overall it was a good read and held my interest.
The editing is okay, most readers won’t recognize the minor errors.
Sentence structures are uniformly good.
Character Development is adequate for the central characters.
Details are adequate.
The plot is complex and involves deceit, and family secrets.
The writing style is too emotional for my taste, but many readers will be attracted to it.
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Author – Gary Corbin
Genre – Crime Thriller
Word Count - 105,000
Rating – Four stars out of Five
No. 53 - 2022
Posted 12/18/2022
My Impressions: Complex plot, intense, highly emotional.
Main Characters:
Valorie Dawes – Rookie policewoman
Gil Kryzinski – Police Sergeant, Val’s boyfriend
Maggi McCloskey- Valorie’s whacko mother
The story is set in the East Coast city of Clayton. Rookie policewoman Valorie Dawes has been involved in three shooting incidents in her first year and is restricted from carrying a firearm by the department shrink. Her boyfriend, Gil, is recuperating from a gunshot wound and is just returning to limited duty.
Val was raped by a family friend when she was twelve and has intimacy issues that impede her relationship with Gil. She doesn’t like to be touched. Her father is a weak recovering alcoholic, her brother is a weak liberal, and her mother ran off with and married the man who raped her. Not a typical healthy family environment for a young girl to grow up in.
Maggi and her husband are extreme right wing antigovernment fanatics who plan a violent, murderous, attack in Clayton on the Fourth of July.
When Maggi comes back to town to implement her nefarious act, Valorie learns she has a nine-year-old brother from the relationship of Maggi with Val’s rapist. During this time, I felt some of Val’s actions were too contrived in order to advance the plot. But overall it was a good read and held my interest.
The editing is okay, most readers won’t recognize the minor errors.
Sentence structures are uniformly good.
Character Development is adequate for the central characters.
Details are adequate.
The plot is complex and involves deceit, and family secrets.
The writing style is too emotional for my taste, but many readers will be attracted to it.
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Title – Masters & Marionettes
Author – Sue Joslin
Genre – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller
236 Amazon Pages
Rating 5 stars out of 5
No. 52 - 2020
Posted 12/14/2022
My Impressions: betrayal, revenge, personal awakening, violent,
Main Characters:
Nasir Abdul Baith – fighter for The People's Army of Shariah
Tarig – Nasir's step brother, fighter for the People's Army of Shariah, with ambitions of world power.
David Munro – United States of America President, a crooked, power hungry elitist.
David Melville - British Prime Minister, another crooked, power hungry, elitist.
Masters and Marionettes begins in the deserts of Saudi Arabia as The Peoples Army of Shariah destroy a giant field of solar panels. The story is set several decades in the future after the use of all forms of fossil fuel has been outlawed worldwide. The president of the United States is attempting to consolidate his power by controlling all electrical generation worldwide. He will then be in a position to force other nations to do as he dictates or return to the dark ages.
Bombmaker Nasir Abdul Baith escapes torture when he's caught after the destruction in Arabia. He then starts a dangerous and exciting clandestine journey to reach England.
A group of young Muslim college students are radicalized by Tarig to become a terrorist cell and pledge their lives and death to Allah.
The story is rife with betrayal and hidden motives.
I enjoyed Masters and Marionettes and highly recommend it.
The editing and sentence structure are good and character development is thorough for the main characters.
Details are plentiful.
The plot of Master's and Marionettes is fresh with a twisted ending.
The writing style flows well and held my interest.
This review was provided in exchange for a free book.
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Author – Sue Joslin
Genre – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller
236 Amazon Pages
Rating 5 stars out of 5
No. 52 - 2020
Posted 12/14/2022
My Impressions: betrayal, revenge, personal awakening, violent,
Main Characters:
Nasir Abdul Baith – fighter for The People's Army of Shariah
Tarig – Nasir's step brother, fighter for the People's Army of Shariah, with ambitions of world power.
David Munro – United States of America President, a crooked, power hungry elitist.
David Melville - British Prime Minister, another crooked, power hungry, elitist.
Masters and Marionettes begins in the deserts of Saudi Arabia as The Peoples Army of Shariah destroy a giant field of solar panels. The story is set several decades in the future after the use of all forms of fossil fuel has been outlawed worldwide. The president of the United States is attempting to consolidate his power by controlling all electrical generation worldwide. He will then be in a position to force other nations to do as he dictates or return to the dark ages.
Bombmaker Nasir Abdul Baith escapes torture when he's caught after the destruction in Arabia. He then starts a dangerous and exciting clandestine journey to reach England.
A group of young Muslim college students are radicalized by Tarig to become a terrorist cell and pledge their lives and death to Allah.
The story is rife with betrayal and hidden motives.
I enjoyed Masters and Marionettes and highly recommend it.
The editing and sentence structure are good and character development is thorough for the main characters.
Details are plentiful.
The plot of Master's and Marionettes is fresh with a twisted ending.
The writing style flows well and held my interest.
This review was provided in exchange for a free book.
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Title – Dead Money
Author – Dan Gilvezan
Genre – Detective, Mystery
260 Amazon Pages
Rating 4 stars out of 5
Posted 12/2/2022
No. 51 - 2022
My Impressions: Cozy mystery with gutsy, low key detective.
Main Characters:
Jolly Lomax – detective, amateur magician
Mildred ver Dorn – wealthy client
Pamela ver Dorn – dead step-daughter
Dead Money kicks off with a rich matron wanting Jolly Lomax to contact her dead daughter who she believes is pilfering money from a shared account. She hires Jolly because he is also a slight of hand magician.
Jolly makes some crazy moves during his investigation and finally cracks the case with help from a friend.
The story relies on humor and a style of Cozy Mysteries.
The editing is fairly good with a few exceptions: words missing etc., and a few sentences are clumsy.
Character Development for Dead Money is good for the main characters.
Details – too much about minor issues became filler.
The plot is interesting and had a few twists and a surprise ending.
The writing style is wordy and uses far too many passive sentences.
Note: A hacksaw blade without a frame would take many hours to saw through eight 1" diameter steel rods. I consider that a grievous error in the plot. There are several other lesser ones, but cozy mystery fans will ignore them and not know any better.
Dead Money is okay for a light read, but it is not a serious crime novel for hard-core addicts.
This review was provided in exchange for a free book.
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Author – Dan Gilvezan
Genre – Detective, Mystery
260 Amazon Pages
Rating 4 stars out of 5
Posted 12/2/2022
No. 51 - 2022
My Impressions: Cozy mystery with gutsy, low key detective.
Main Characters:
Jolly Lomax – detective, amateur magician
Mildred ver Dorn – wealthy client
Pamela ver Dorn – dead step-daughter
Dead Money kicks off with a rich matron wanting Jolly Lomax to contact her dead daughter who she believes is pilfering money from a shared account. She hires Jolly because he is also a slight of hand magician.
Jolly makes some crazy moves during his investigation and finally cracks the case with help from a friend.
The story relies on humor and a style of Cozy Mysteries.
The editing is fairly good with a few exceptions: words missing etc., and a few sentences are clumsy.
Character Development for Dead Money is good for the main characters.
Details – too much about minor issues became filler.
The plot is interesting and had a few twists and a surprise ending.
The writing style is wordy and uses far too many passive sentences.
Note: A hacksaw blade without a frame would take many hours to saw through eight 1" diameter steel rods. I consider that a grievous error in the plot. There are several other lesser ones, but cozy mystery fans will ignore them and not know any better.
Dead Money is okay for a light read, but it is not a serious crime novel for hard-core addicts.
This review was provided in exchange for a free book.
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Title – The Wrong Dame
Author – David Lee Dambrosio
Genre – Mystery, Thriller, Crime Noir
Word Count 87,000
Rating 4 stars out of 5
Posted 11/25/2022
No. – 50-2022
My Impressions: 1949 Cleveland, Ohio, pinstriped suits, gangsters, a moll, true love.
Main Characters:
Harry Hamm – tough P.I.
Addie – Harry's secretary then girlfriend.
Earl Griggs – P.I. and Harry's best friend.
Harry, Earl and two other buddies who served in WWII in Europe start a detective agency after the war.
Harry is the tough guy and Earl is the thinker/planner. The other partners become involved with 'The Wrong Dame' who has stolen money and record ledgers from the son of a local gang leader. Those two partners are murdered and Vera is captured and tortured by the gangsters.
The story then revolves around the gangsters trying to get their property back and Vera and Earl conniving to increase their wealth by selling the ledgers back to the gangsters.
Harry and Addie are romantically involved and find themselves forced to be middle men to broker a deal between the thieves and the gangsters in order to stay alive.
The Wrong Dame is a bit tongue in cheek. If you can work around that it's an enjoyable story with interesting characters.
The action is fast, frequent and deadly with high body counts.
The editing, sentence structure and character descriptions are well done.
The plot is fast paced and interesting.
Details are sparse for readers who want to know how actions came to be instead of them simply happening.
The writing style is reminiscent of the forties and fifties noir stories.
There is cursing and sexual inuendo in the story.
This review was provided in exchange for a free book.
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Author – David Lee Dambrosio
Genre – Mystery, Thriller, Crime Noir
Word Count 87,000
Rating 4 stars out of 5
Posted 11/25/2022
No. – 50-2022
My Impressions: 1949 Cleveland, Ohio, pinstriped suits, gangsters, a moll, true love.
Main Characters:
Harry Hamm – tough P.I.
Addie – Harry's secretary then girlfriend.
Earl Griggs – P.I. and Harry's best friend.
Harry, Earl and two other buddies who served in WWII in Europe start a detective agency after the war.
Harry is the tough guy and Earl is the thinker/planner. The other partners become involved with 'The Wrong Dame' who has stolen money and record ledgers from the son of a local gang leader. Those two partners are murdered and Vera is captured and tortured by the gangsters.
The story then revolves around the gangsters trying to get their property back and Vera and Earl conniving to increase their wealth by selling the ledgers back to the gangsters.
Harry and Addie are romantically involved and find themselves forced to be middle men to broker a deal between the thieves and the gangsters in order to stay alive.
The Wrong Dame is a bit tongue in cheek. If you can work around that it's an enjoyable story with interesting characters.
The action is fast, frequent and deadly with high body counts.
The editing, sentence structure and character descriptions are well done.
The plot is fast paced and interesting.
Details are sparse for readers who want to know how actions came to be instead of them simply happening.
The writing style is reminiscent of the forties and fifties noir stories.
There is cursing and sexual inuendo in the story.
This review was provided in exchange for a free book.
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Title – Succubus
Author – Regis P. Sheehan
Genre – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller
53,700 Words
Rating 5 stars our of 5
Posted 11/18/2022
No. – 49/2022
My Impressions: 2003, NK border, international espionage, nuclear scientist extraction, good action
Main Characters:
Michael Paul Medved – Special Ops.
Bear – Special ops, working with Medved
Succubus is wide ranging with many legs. It has action in Italy, Iraq, China and North Korea. Many support characters pass through and disappear. Paul Medved and his partner Bear are the primary agents who set in motion the plan they are charged with.
The plot builds to the primary operation, the extraction of a nuclear scientist wanting to defect from North Korea. The three-person team involved directly in entering China and then North Korea provide the conflict and intensity that carries that part of the plot.
The editing and sentence structure are good, not perfect but good, and character development is excellent for the several main characters.
The plot is excellent and abundant details enhance the narrative.
I enjoyed this story and highly recommend it.
This review was provided in exchange for a free book.
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Author – Regis P. Sheehan
Genre – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller
53,700 Words
Rating 5 stars our of 5
Posted 11/18/2022
No. – 49/2022
My Impressions: 2003, NK border, international espionage, nuclear scientist extraction, good action
Main Characters:
Michael Paul Medved – Special Ops.
Bear – Special ops, working with Medved
Succubus is wide ranging with many legs. It has action in Italy, Iraq, China and North Korea. Many support characters pass through and disappear. Paul Medved and his partner Bear are the primary agents who set in motion the plan they are charged with.
The plot builds to the primary operation, the extraction of a nuclear scientist wanting to defect from North Korea. The three-person team involved directly in entering China and then North Korea provide the conflict and intensity that carries that part of the plot.
The editing and sentence structure are good, not perfect but good, and character development is excellent for the several main characters.
The plot is excellent and abundant details enhance the narrative.
I enjoyed this story and highly recommend it.
This review was provided in exchange for a free book.
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Title – High Treason
Author – Peter Vielhaber
Genre – Thriller, War, Political Intrugue
Word Count 97,800
Rating 5 stars out of 5
Posted 11/6/2022
No. 48 - 2022
My Impressions: violent, enthralling, well though out, good and evil characters, political corruption, vengeance
Main Characters:
Brian Gray – ex-soldier with Delta Force and now in the CIA.
Mark Kelly – ex-soldier and now with the CIA.
Michael Rogers – United States Senator who wants to be the next US President.
Craig Piper – CIA Director
Jonathan Hillsdale – Wealthy mover and shaker in politics.
High Treason is one of the best novels I've read in a long time. Brian Gray and his four man team are assigned a snatch and grab or assassinate operation in Syria. Descriptions of the abject horror inflicted on the citizens are detailed and thought provoking. The team accomplishes its mission and captures a high-ranking terrorist leader. But there is a high price paid by the team. After his return to the US Brian Gray learns he and his team were caught up in a bizarre plot originating back in Washington D.C.
Three men plan to throw the U.S. government into chaos for their own personal gain. Their diabolical method cost the lives of thousands of US Government employees and the exposure of many CIA personnel.
The plot is well thought out and action packed. The descriptions are a bit gruesome but realistic.
The editing and sentence structure are far above average.
Character development is exceptional for the good characters and the villains. And the villains are self-serving maniacs.
The plot is fast moving and sweeps the reader along at a fast pace.
Details are abundant and in-depth.
Research is evident in the workings of the CIA operations and structure.
The writing style is thought provoking and fast paced.
I thoroughly enjoyed High Treason and highly recommend it.
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Author – Peter Vielhaber
Genre – Thriller, War, Political Intrugue
Word Count 97,800
Rating 5 stars out of 5
Posted 11/6/2022
No. 48 - 2022
My Impressions: violent, enthralling, well though out, good and evil characters, political corruption, vengeance
Main Characters:
Brian Gray – ex-soldier with Delta Force and now in the CIA.
Mark Kelly – ex-soldier and now with the CIA.
Michael Rogers – United States Senator who wants to be the next US President.
Craig Piper – CIA Director
Jonathan Hillsdale – Wealthy mover and shaker in politics.
High Treason is one of the best novels I've read in a long time. Brian Gray and his four man team are assigned a snatch and grab or assassinate operation in Syria. Descriptions of the abject horror inflicted on the citizens are detailed and thought provoking. The team accomplishes its mission and captures a high-ranking terrorist leader. But there is a high price paid by the team. After his return to the US Brian Gray learns he and his team were caught up in a bizarre plot originating back in Washington D.C.
Three men plan to throw the U.S. government into chaos for their own personal gain. Their diabolical method cost the lives of thousands of US Government employees and the exposure of many CIA personnel.
The plot is well thought out and action packed. The descriptions are a bit gruesome but realistic.
The editing and sentence structure are far above average.
Character development is exceptional for the good characters and the villains. And the villains are self-serving maniacs.
The plot is fast moving and sweeps the reader along at a fast pace.
Details are abundant and in-depth.
Research is evident in the workings of the CIA operations and structure.
The writing style is thought provoking and fast paced.
I thoroughly enjoyed High Treason and highly recommend it.
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Title – Hard Target
Author – Bill Runner
Genre – Thriller
Word Count - 72,800
Rating – Five stars out of five
No. 44 - 2022
Posted 10/28/2022
My Impressions: Exciting, action filled, tough as nails
Main Characters:
Axel Blaze – Tough guy out for justice
Zoey Clark – Beautiful police officer
Mason Biggs – Hacker who gets into files the owner will kill for
Zeke Adkins – Another proficient good guy who likes to fight
Dirk Reynolds – Pedophile…need I say more?
Axel is on vacation in Kentucky and stumbles onto an ambush at a gas station along a backroad. He strides into battle mode and decimates the ex-military mercenaries. A cop is wounded and his novice partner is in over her head. They had been transporting a young man accused of murder and were badly outnumbered when they were isolated at the isolated gas station. And then along came long, lean, lanky, slow walkin, slow talkin, hard fightin Axel Blaze.
Mason Biggs got evidence against several pedophiles one of whom owns a company supplying mercenaries for hire. The hardened killers are large in numbers but no match for ex-special forces and ex-US Marshall Blaze. During the action, Axel must have knocked out at least 37 bad guys with a single punch to each head or banged their heads against anything harder than their skulls.
The action is fast paced and frequent until the end where Axel and Zeke team up to bring the perps to justice.
The editing and sentence structure are good
Character Development is good enough for the main characters and adequate for supporting characters.
Details and research are adequate for the story dominated by violent action.
The plot is standard kick butt action hero who you know is going to win.
The writing style is fast and quickly jumps from one action sequence to the next.
Vigilant Reader Book Reviews.
Author – Bill Runner
Genre – Thriller
Word Count - 72,800
Rating – Five stars out of five
No. 44 - 2022
Posted 10/28/2022
My Impressions: Exciting, action filled, tough as nails
Main Characters:
Axel Blaze – Tough guy out for justice
Zoey Clark – Beautiful police officer
Mason Biggs – Hacker who gets into files the owner will kill for
Zeke Adkins – Another proficient good guy who likes to fight
Dirk Reynolds – Pedophile…need I say more?
Axel is on vacation in Kentucky and stumbles onto an ambush at a gas station along a backroad. He strides into battle mode and decimates the ex-military mercenaries. A cop is wounded and his novice partner is in over her head. They had been transporting a young man accused of murder and were badly outnumbered when they were isolated at the isolated gas station. And then along came long, lean, lanky, slow walkin, slow talkin, hard fightin Axel Blaze.
Mason Biggs got evidence against several pedophiles one of whom owns a company supplying mercenaries for hire. The hardened killers are large in numbers but no match for ex-special forces and ex-US Marshall Blaze. During the action, Axel must have knocked out at least 37 bad guys with a single punch to each head or banged their heads against anything harder than their skulls.
The action is fast paced and frequent until the end where Axel and Zeke team up to bring the perps to justice.
The editing and sentence structure are good
Character Development is good enough for the main characters and adequate for supporting characters.
Details and research are adequate for the story dominated by violent action.
The plot is standard kick butt action hero who you know is going to win.
The writing style is fast and quickly jumps from one action sequence to the next.
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Title – From Capitalism to Socialism or Worse
Author – Robert Schobernd
Genre – Politics
Word Count - 140,000
Rating – Five stars out of five
No. 43 - 2022
Posted 10/22/2022
My Impressions: Excellent disclosures backed up with facts and credible opinions.
This political treatise is well put together and covers many of todays political issues from a decidedly conservative viewpoint. The authors opinions are blunt and well stated with plenty of information to support them. He calls the Democrats in charge of the major liberal blue states and large metropolitan cities out for the high crime rates, defunding the police, supporting no cash bail, and soft on crime lack of enforcement of existing laws.
Slavery, racism, abortion, climate change, and fossil fuel elimination are extensively covered, and many little-known facts are presented.
Details of the January 6, 2021, Capital Building Riot and the 2020 presidential election are thoroughly exposed with well documented facts and opinions.
The longest chapter discussed the accomplishments of President Donald Trump vs. Joseph Biden.
But the most though provoking chapter was mankind’s future with the advancing growth of robotic and artificial intelligence. The information presented on those subjects is chilling.
The editing and sentence structure are professionally done.
Details and research are in depth and exemplary.
I highly recommend this thought-provoking book.
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Author – Robert Schobernd
Genre – Politics
Word Count - 140,000
Rating – Five stars out of five
No. 43 - 2022
Posted 10/22/2022
My Impressions: Excellent disclosures backed up with facts and credible opinions.
This political treatise is well put together and covers many of todays political issues from a decidedly conservative viewpoint. The authors opinions are blunt and well stated with plenty of information to support them. He calls the Democrats in charge of the major liberal blue states and large metropolitan cities out for the high crime rates, defunding the police, supporting no cash bail, and soft on crime lack of enforcement of existing laws.
Slavery, racism, abortion, climate change, and fossil fuel elimination are extensively covered, and many little-known facts are presented.
Details of the January 6, 2021, Capital Building Riot and the 2020 presidential election are thoroughly exposed with well documented facts and opinions.
The longest chapter discussed the accomplishments of President Donald Trump vs. Joseph Biden.
But the most though provoking chapter was mankind’s future with the advancing growth of robotic and artificial intelligence. The information presented on those subjects is chilling.
The editing and sentence structure are professionally done.
Details and research are in depth and exemplary.
I highly recommend this thought-provoking book.
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Title – Deadly Frost
Author – Terry Shipley
Genre – Thriller
101,000 Words
Rating 5 stars out of 5
Posted 10/7/2022
No. 47 - 2022
My Impressions: Frost's portion; humorous around his family, forced to be a vigilante.
DAZ's portion: dangerous psychopath, gruesome, intelligent sicko.
Main Characters:
Talus Drake Frost – Air Force Captain, 6' 190 lb, 962 AWACS unit at Elmendorf A.F.B. Alaska
David Allen Zane – Serial killer known as DAZ, Military Police Sargent until he is kicked out of the Air Force.
Clint Zane – Serial Killer's brother
Many additional characters add to the diverse appeal of this novel.
Deadly Frost has a plot to make a good story and lives up to its potential. The characters are interesting, and a bit over the top. Frost’s family members bring light hearted humor, and the bad guy is diabolical. The contrast was vivid and displayed the psychotic nature of the serial killer against average humans.
The story is about a big, tough, intelligent serial killer who enjoys frightening, torturing, and killing young women. Frost gets involved when he stops the abduction of a young woman on the air base in Alaska. Afterwards, DAZ hates Frost for interfering in his perverse game and pledges to get even. From there the story is full of well written action. DAZ continues to abduct, torture, and murder young women while his brother covers for him. Frost has more interaction when his family members are threatened and attacked, and he vows to bring the huge, muscular serial killer down.
There are many characters I quickly became fond of and looked forward to their interaction with Frost.
A sub-character I particularly liked had a minor role at the end when he, Preacher, interacted with Clint Zane.
The story was interesting, and I recommend it highly.
The prose has been professionally edited and is easy to read and enjoy.
Sentence structures flow easily and makes sense.
The writing style is clean and well organized.
Serious research is evident throughout the story.
The plot explores the conflict between a strong-willed honorable man and a mean, diabolical serial rapist murderer.
There is frequent cursing and strong, torturous sex scenes. The story is not for Snowflakes
This review was provided in exchange for a free book.
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Author – Terry Shipley
Genre – Thriller
101,000 Words
Rating 5 stars out of 5
Posted 10/7/2022
No. 47 - 2022
My Impressions: Frost's portion; humorous around his family, forced to be a vigilante.
DAZ's portion: dangerous psychopath, gruesome, intelligent sicko.
Main Characters:
Talus Drake Frost – Air Force Captain, 6' 190 lb, 962 AWACS unit at Elmendorf A.F.B. Alaska
David Allen Zane – Serial killer known as DAZ, Military Police Sargent until he is kicked out of the Air Force.
Clint Zane – Serial Killer's brother
Many additional characters add to the diverse appeal of this novel.
Deadly Frost has a plot to make a good story and lives up to its potential. The characters are interesting, and a bit over the top. Frost’s family members bring light hearted humor, and the bad guy is diabolical. The contrast was vivid and displayed the psychotic nature of the serial killer against average humans.
The story is about a big, tough, intelligent serial killer who enjoys frightening, torturing, and killing young women. Frost gets involved when he stops the abduction of a young woman on the air base in Alaska. Afterwards, DAZ hates Frost for interfering in his perverse game and pledges to get even. From there the story is full of well written action. DAZ continues to abduct, torture, and murder young women while his brother covers for him. Frost has more interaction when his family members are threatened and attacked, and he vows to bring the huge, muscular serial killer down.
There are many characters I quickly became fond of and looked forward to their interaction with Frost.
A sub-character I particularly liked had a minor role at the end when he, Preacher, interacted with Clint Zane.
The story was interesting, and I recommend it highly.
The prose has been professionally edited and is easy to read and enjoy.
Sentence structures flow easily and makes sense.
The writing style is clean and well organized.
Serious research is evident throughout the story.
The plot explores the conflict between a strong-willed honorable man and a mean, diabolical serial rapist murderer.
There is frequent cursing and strong, torturous sex scenes. The story is not for Snowflakes
This review was provided in exchange for a free book.
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Title – Right to Kill
Author – John Barlow
Genre – Crime Thriller/Murder Mystery
Word Count - 80,000
Rating – 5 stars out of 5
No. 42 - 2022
Posted 10/1/2022
My Impressions: Slow but steady, lots of self-introspection, masterful manipulation of the reader
Main Characters:
Detective Joe Romano – middle age, past his peak, a loner
Detective Rita Scannon – tough, competent, brave but not foolish
Craig Shaw & Jason Beverage – dope dealing scumbags
Joe Romano is a detective sergeant in Leeds, England, with an ex-career, ex-wife and a son away at university. His career stumbled after a stint in France with Interpol and his wife divorcing him for a Frenchman. He spends most of his day on self-introspection while.slogging through mundane assignments chasing missing persons and minor cases no one cares about. Then one of his missing persons is found in his mother’s burned car after he was brutally murdered in a most unusual way. That case thrusts Joe into the role of lead detective.
While interrogating Craig Shaw’s mother for a clue as to why her only son was killed, he feels she is holding information back. He draws close to her as he searches his heart for how he would feel if his only son, Sam, died. Long periods of internal reflection ensue as he and Rita conduct an investigation quickly expanded by the death of another young man, this time a nineteen-year-old low life drug dealer, rapist, thief.
Several prime suspects emerge, and Joe follows up with one of several women he meets and is attracted to.
When the murderer finally confesses and is apprehend, the plot takes another turn and is off and running again.
The editing & sentence structure are professional grade.
Character development is thorough and almost overdone with Joe
Details and research paint a vivid picture of English countryside and people
The plot is detailed and has a surprise in-store, so pay attention.
The writing style is typically slow but heavily detailed English writing. I liked it.
The story has a lot of English terms and slang I didn't know: like busker and mangle.
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Author – John Barlow
Genre – Crime Thriller/Murder Mystery
Word Count - 80,000
Rating – 5 stars out of 5
No. 42 - 2022
Posted 10/1/2022
My Impressions: Slow but steady, lots of self-introspection, masterful manipulation of the reader
Main Characters:
Detective Joe Romano – middle age, past his peak, a loner
Detective Rita Scannon – tough, competent, brave but not foolish
Craig Shaw & Jason Beverage – dope dealing scumbags
Joe Romano is a detective sergeant in Leeds, England, with an ex-career, ex-wife and a son away at university. His career stumbled after a stint in France with Interpol and his wife divorcing him for a Frenchman. He spends most of his day on self-introspection while.slogging through mundane assignments chasing missing persons and minor cases no one cares about. Then one of his missing persons is found in his mother’s burned car after he was brutally murdered in a most unusual way. That case thrusts Joe into the role of lead detective.
While interrogating Craig Shaw’s mother for a clue as to why her only son was killed, he feels she is holding information back. He draws close to her as he searches his heart for how he would feel if his only son, Sam, died. Long periods of internal reflection ensue as he and Rita conduct an investigation quickly expanded by the death of another young man, this time a nineteen-year-old low life drug dealer, rapist, thief.
Several prime suspects emerge, and Joe follows up with one of several women he meets and is attracted to.
When the murderer finally confesses and is apprehend, the plot takes another turn and is off and running again.
The editing & sentence structure are professional grade.
Character development is thorough and almost overdone with Joe
Details and research paint a vivid picture of English countryside and people
The plot is detailed and has a surprise in-store, so pay attention.
The writing style is typically slow but heavily detailed English writing. I liked it.
The story has a lot of English terms and slang I didn't know: like busker and mangle.
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Title – Team Avenging Angel
Author – Charles S. Isaacs
Genre – Crime Thriller
Word Count - 101,000
Rating – 5 stars out of 5
No. 41 - 2022
Posted 9/23/2022
My Impressions: Violent vigilante justice dispensed mainly by women.
Main Characters:
Cassandra ‘Cassie’ Monroe – Twenty-five Y.O.
Mike Borelli – Private Eye- ex-cop. 35
Dante Washington – Cassie’s mentor, physical instructor.
Amy Dawson and Rita – Team members
Jennifer Scott – Team Member
Jerry O’Bannon - Detective
Pete Fanelli – Detective
Tom Whitman – Psychopathic killer
Many more support characters and antagonist.
1976 Brooklyn, New York.
Cassie was born in the south and was raped by three Ku Klux Klansmen when she was twelve. Her father moved her to New York City where she excelled in learning martial arts. After going south for a short spell for vigilante justice she began to ambush muggers, rapist, and killers preying on women. She met and fell in love with P.I. Mike Borelli, a tough ex-cop. Mike is curious why two detectives, O’Bannon and Fanelli keep trying to pin the murder of a serial killer on him.
The story follows the Avenging Angel team, four women and two men, through one tough scrape after another as they dispense their version of justice. The story is violent and mostly about individuals attacking single women jogging in parks.
While practicing for a tough role she is about to engage in Cassie learns inner fears and values deep within herself. When she is captured by seven killer thugs and is being tortured for information, the rest of the team and reinforcements arrive to save her.
I enjoyed this story and recommend it for readers who like rough, violent characters who are really heroes with a heart. There is infrequent cursing and talk of sex but nothing graphic.
The editing & sentence structure are mostly good.
Character development is detailed and consistent.
Details & research are adequate where needed.
The plot is involved and complex as the Team goes after criminals
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Author – Charles S. Isaacs
Genre – Crime Thriller
Word Count - 101,000
Rating – 5 stars out of 5
No. 41 - 2022
Posted 9/23/2022
My Impressions: Violent vigilante justice dispensed mainly by women.
Main Characters:
Cassandra ‘Cassie’ Monroe – Twenty-five Y.O.
Mike Borelli – Private Eye- ex-cop. 35
Dante Washington – Cassie’s mentor, physical instructor.
Amy Dawson and Rita – Team members
Jennifer Scott – Team Member
Jerry O’Bannon - Detective
Pete Fanelli – Detective
Tom Whitman – Psychopathic killer
Many more support characters and antagonist.
1976 Brooklyn, New York.
Cassie was born in the south and was raped by three Ku Klux Klansmen when she was twelve. Her father moved her to New York City where she excelled in learning martial arts. After going south for a short spell for vigilante justice she began to ambush muggers, rapist, and killers preying on women. She met and fell in love with P.I. Mike Borelli, a tough ex-cop. Mike is curious why two detectives, O’Bannon and Fanelli keep trying to pin the murder of a serial killer on him.
The story follows the Avenging Angel team, four women and two men, through one tough scrape after another as they dispense their version of justice. The story is violent and mostly about individuals attacking single women jogging in parks.
While practicing for a tough role she is about to engage in Cassie learns inner fears and values deep within herself. When she is captured by seven killer thugs and is being tortured for information, the rest of the team and reinforcements arrive to save her.
I enjoyed this story and recommend it for readers who like rough, violent characters who are really heroes with a heart. There is infrequent cursing and talk of sex but nothing graphic.
The editing & sentence structure are mostly good.
Character development is detailed and consistent.
Details & research are adequate where needed.
The plot is involved and complex as the Team goes after criminals
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Title – The Murderer's Wife
Author – Daralyse Lyons
Genre – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller
184 Amazon Pages
Rating 5 stars out of 5
Posted 9/16/2022/2018
No 40-2022
My Impressions: Gruesome, love story, unexpected twist at the end.
Main Characters:
Laura Cutty – The Murder's Wife.
Thomas Cutty – The murderer.
Detective Condoleezza Barge – homicide detective.
Thomas and Laura Cutty are an outstandingly attractive couple; she a petite' beautiful blonde and he a tall, muscular and ruggedly handsome male animal. They are lovers in the purest sense of the word.
Laura Cutty knows her husband is a serial murderer and supports him in the acts. Not because she approves of his murdering ways, but because she loves him and accept he is doing good things even if society would not agree. She has an untenable relationship with her two living parents; she should ask Thomas to deal with them but doesn't.
Thomas Cutty is a man driven to kill. but he is selective in choosing his victims. They must be abusive to their wives or children to draw his attention. Simply cheating on a wife is not enough reason for them to die. He lived in and abusive household and saw his mother beaten daily until he took action.
Of course, after many years of murdering and a string of twenty plus vigilante killings it has to come to a head.
Enter Detective Barge and her partner. There is no evidence pointing to the serial killer, but during her investigation she meets Thomas. She is infatuated with him and makes excuses to be near him.
The ending is imaginative and was a total surprise.
The overall editing of The Murderer's Wife is exceptional.
Character development is detailed and paints a clear picture of individual's strengths and weaknesses.
The details in the story are adequate.
The plot is witty and original.
The writing style is crisp and displays the characters emotions well.
There are mildly detailed sexual situations, but they're not graphic.
I enjoyed The Murder's Wife and highly recommend it.
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Author – Daralyse Lyons
Genre – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller
184 Amazon Pages
Rating 5 stars out of 5
Posted 9/16/2022/2018
No 40-2022
My Impressions: Gruesome, love story, unexpected twist at the end.
Main Characters:
Laura Cutty – The Murder's Wife.
Thomas Cutty – The murderer.
Detective Condoleezza Barge – homicide detective.
Thomas and Laura Cutty are an outstandingly attractive couple; she a petite' beautiful blonde and he a tall, muscular and ruggedly handsome male animal. They are lovers in the purest sense of the word.
Laura Cutty knows her husband is a serial murderer and supports him in the acts. Not because she approves of his murdering ways, but because she loves him and accept he is doing good things even if society would not agree. She has an untenable relationship with her two living parents; she should ask Thomas to deal with them but doesn't.
Thomas Cutty is a man driven to kill. but he is selective in choosing his victims. They must be abusive to their wives or children to draw his attention. Simply cheating on a wife is not enough reason for them to die. He lived in and abusive household and saw his mother beaten daily until he took action.
Of course, after many years of murdering and a string of twenty plus vigilante killings it has to come to a head.
Enter Detective Barge and her partner. There is no evidence pointing to the serial killer, but during her investigation she meets Thomas. She is infatuated with him and makes excuses to be near him.
The ending is imaginative and was a total surprise.
The overall editing of The Murderer's Wife is exceptional.
Character development is detailed and paints a clear picture of individual's strengths and weaknesses.
The details in the story are adequate.
The plot is witty and original.
The writing style is crisp and displays the characters emotions well.
There are mildly detailed sexual situations, but they're not graphic.
I enjoyed The Murder's Wife and highly recommend it.
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Title – Deadly Odds 5.0
Author – Allen Wyler
Genre – Techno Thriller
Word Count - 78,000
Rating – 4 stars out of 5
No. 34 –2022
Posted 9/9/2022
My Impressions: Arnold, a nerdy geek who speaks baby talk to his dog and girlfriend, well written.
Main Characters:
Arnold Gold – IT geek
Palmer Davidson – Defense Lawyer
Rachel Weinstein – Arnold’s girlfriend
Carlos Lopez – Victim
Ramesh Singh – Accomplished hacker, antagonist
Chance – Arnold’s dog
Arnold and Rachel have issues because he has IT offices in Honolulu, Hawaii, and Seattle, Washington. She doesn’t want him to be away from Hawaii overnight. He’s a wimp and she is a whiner. He speaks ‘baby talk’ to his dog and his girlfriend. I felt they should divorce before considering marriage.
Arnold signs onto a job to uncover evidence to prove Palmer Davidson’s client, Carlos Lopez, is innocent of crimes he is accused of.
Quickly, Arnold draws the ire of the hacker framing Carlos, and he and his business are targeted in what becomes a war of high-level computer geeks.
When hacker Ramesh Singh breaks into Arnold’s home, Chance attacks and bites him on the arm providing evidence that Ramesh is behind framing Carlos for the crimes he didn’t commit.
If readers are versed on computer equipment and hacking, they should love this story.
The editing and sentence structure are good except for missing and misspelled words and comma issues scattered throughout.
Character Development is good for all main characters.
Details and research are full of technical computer terms
The plot is unusual and unfolds at a slow pace as Arnold figures out who the antagonist is.
There is occasional hardcore cursing but no graphic sex.
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Author – Allen Wyler
Genre – Techno Thriller
Word Count - 78,000
Rating – 4 stars out of 5
No. 34 –2022
Posted 9/9/2022
My Impressions: Arnold, a nerdy geek who speaks baby talk to his dog and girlfriend, well written.
Main Characters:
Arnold Gold – IT geek
Palmer Davidson – Defense Lawyer
Rachel Weinstein – Arnold’s girlfriend
Carlos Lopez – Victim
Ramesh Singh – Accomplished hacker, antagonist
Chance – Arnold’s dog
Arnold and Rachel have issues because he has IT offices in Honolulu, Hawaii, and Seattle, Washington. She doesn’t want him to be away from Hawaii overnight. He’s a wimp and she is a whiner. He speaks ‘baby talk’ to his dog and his girlfriend. I felt they should divorce before considering marriage.
Arnold signs onto a job to uncover evidence to prove Palmer Davidson’s client, Carlos Lopez, is innocent of crimes he is accused of.
Quickly, Arnold draws the ire of the hacker framing Carlos, and he and his business are targeted in what becomes a war of high-level computer geeks.
When hacker Ramesh Singh breaks into Arnold’s home, Chance attacks and bites him on the arm providing evidence that Ramesh is behind framing Carlos for the crimes he didn’t commit.
If readers are versed on computer equipment and hacking, they should love this story.
The editing and sentence structure are good except for missing and misspelled words and comma issues scattered throughout.
Character Development is good for all main characters.
Details and research are full of technical computer terms
The plot is unusual and unfolds at a slow pace as Arnold figures out who the antagonist is.
There is occasional hardcore cursing but no graphic sex.
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Title – In Search of Valor
Author – Gary Corbin
Genre – Mystery/Amateur Sleuth
Word Count - 33,000
Rating – 4 stars out of 5
No. 33 - 2022
Posted 9/1/2022
My Impressions: suspenseful, well written, fresh plot
Main Characters:
Valory Dawes – College criminal studies student 18 Y.O.
Rhonda LeMieux – Valory’s college friend, unmarried mother, Jamaican
Jada – 18 month old kidnapped infant.
Tanisha Jordan – Detective, 35 Y.O.
Marty Rizzo – Jada’s father.
Issac Lewis – Antagonist.
Valory Dawes aims to become a police officer after college. She and Rhonda team up for a class project and meet one morning to discuss it. Rhonda is late picking Jada up from childcare where she learns her mother has already picked the baby up; but there’s a problem. Rhonda’s mother died a year ago. Detective Jordan enters and takes the lead in the disappearance. In fits of anger and terror, Rhonda lashes out at everyone; she suspects Jada’s father of staging the abduction but has no proof.
Finally, under harsh questioning, she remembers another man she dated only once several months ago. The story picks up speed then and Valory agrees to become bait to draw the kidnapper into the open after she caught him stalking her. That goes awry and she is captured by the psychopath.
In Search of Valor is an intense, interesting read, and I recommend it.
The editing and sentence structure are good.
Character Development is good for the main characters.
Details and research are adequate.
The plot has a fresh twist with a kidnapping for child trafficking.
Tanisha must have gotten a ‘sad’ one hour paint job because her rust colored Dodge suddenly turned Blue.
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Author – Gary Corbin
Genre – Mystery/Amateur Sleuth
Word Count - 33,000
Rating – 4 stars out of 5
No. 33 - 2022
Posted 9/1/2022
My Impressions: suspenseful, well written, fresh plot
Main Characters:
Valory Dawes – College criminal studies student 18 Y.O.
Rhonda LeMieux – Valory’s college friend, unmarried mother, Jamaican
Jada – 18 month old kidnapped infant.
Tanisha Jordan – Detective, 35 Y.O.
Marty Rizzo – Jada’s father.
Issac Lewis – Antagonist.
Valory Dawes aims to become a police officer after college. She and Rhonda team up for a class project and meet one morning to discuss it. Rhonda is late picking Jada up from childcare where she learns her mother has already picked the baby up; but there’s a problem. Rhonda’s mother died a year ago. Detective Jordan enters and takes the lead in the disappearance. In fits of anger and terror, Rhonda lashes out at everyone; she suspects Jada’s father of staging the abduction but has no proof.
Finally, under harsh questioning, she remembers another man she dated only once several months ago. The story picks up speed then and Valory agrees to become bait to draw the kidnapper into the open after she caught him stalking her. That goes awry and she is captured by the psychopath.
In Search of Valor is an intense, interesting read, and I recommend it.
The editing and sentence structure are good.
Character Development is good for the main characters.
Details and research are adequate.
The plot has a fresh twist with a kidnapping for child trafficking.
Tanisha must have gotten a ‘sad’ one hour paint job because her rust colored Dodge suddenly turned Blue.
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Title – The Alicanto
Author – Amadeo Alcacer
Genre – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller
Word Count – 60,300
Rating 5 stars out of 5
Posted 8/27/2022
No. 37 - 2022
My Impressions: Dark, gritty, violent, two major plot surprises.
Main Characters:
Detective Diego Alandia – Chilean detective loaned to Argentina to chase the Alicanto.
The Alicanto – a psychopathic serial killer who murders and mutilates beautiful young women.
Vera Nalcotinez - Newspaper reporter in Buenos Aries, Argentina
Captain Marquez Pedro - Head of the Alicanto investigation in Buenos Aries.
Detective Ivo Matich – Diego's partner and best friend.
Colonel Daniel Anuncio – Diego's superior officer and eventual father-in-law.
The story moves between Santiago, Chile and Buenos Aries, Argentina.
The tone of the story is dark and gritty.
As a young army recruit, Diego Alandia served in the Chilean army during the reign of General Augusto Pionochet. He had the job of interrogating suspected enemies of the regime using torture if necessary. Having reservations over the treatment of some victims, he balked at killing a man and was eventually kicked out of the army. His future father-in-law, Lieutenant Daniel Anuncio secured Diego a job as a policeman in Santiago. He was good at the job and rose to the position of detective. But his dark past made him an emotional wreck.
After working on the case of two prostitutes who were murdered and mutilated, he was requested by the Argentinean police to assist with the serial killing of young women that were similar to those he and Ivo worked.
Diego is a crooked cop who steals money, drinks excessively and cheats on his wife with prostitutes.
The Alicanto is a Chilean psychopath with deep, dark secrets instilled about the same time Diego was in the army.
His early life was a horror story that no twelve-year-old child should have been forced to endure.
Editing of this story is nearly perfect and sentence structure is good considering the main character is Chilean and speaks broken English.
Development of the main characters is thorough. A clear picture is painted of each main player
Details are broad brushed with few specifics. But they are enough to carry the story.
Research of the Chilean regime during the span of the story is evident.
The plot is dark, gritty, twisted and full of surprises.
The writing style is a bit wordy due to the translation to English and relies on the emotional aspect of the characters which is presented in great detail.
The story contains cursing, talk of torture, and hints of sexual intercourse. None of these are graphic.
Diego Alandia's portion of the Alicanto is presented as a person who's first language is Spanish speaking in non-native English. The Alicanto's portion is much easier to follow.
I was swept up in The Alicanto and highly recommend it. But be assured it is not your typical crime story; it provides insight into two different characters with surprising similarities.
This review was provided in exchange for a free book.
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Author – Amadeo Alcacer
Genre – Mystery, Suspense, Thriller
Word Count – 60,300
Rating 5 stars out of 5
Posted 8/27/2022
No. 37 - 2022
My Impressions: Dark, gritty, violent, two major plot surprises.
Main Characters:
Detective Diego Alandia – Chilean detective loaned to Argentina to chase the Alicanto.
The Alicanto – a psychopathic serial killer who murders and mutilates beautiful young women.
Vera Nalcotinez - Newspaper reporter in Buenos Aries, Argentina
Captain Marquez Pedro - Head of the Alicanto investigation in Buenos Aries.
Detective Ivo Matich – Diego's partner and best friend.
Colonel Daniel Anuncio – Diego's superior officer and eventual father-in-law.
The story moves between Santiago, Chile and Buenos Aries, Argentina.
The tone of the story is dark and gritty.
As a young army recruit, Diego Alandia served in the Chilean army during the reign of General Augusto Pionochet. He had the job of interrogating suspected enemies of the regime using torture if necessary. Having reservations over the treatment of some victims, he balked at killing a man and was eventually kicked out of the army. His future father-in-law, Lieutenant Daniel Anuncio secured Diego a job as a policeman in Santiago. He was good at the job and rose to the position of detective. But his dark past made him an emotional wreck.
After working on the case of two prostitutes who were murdered and mutilated, he was requested by the Argentinean police to assist with the serial killing of young women that were similar to those he and Ivo worked.
Diego is a crooked cop who steals money, drinks excessively and cheats on his wife with prostitutes.
The Alicanto is a Chilean psychopath with deep, dark secrets instilled about the same time Diego was in the army.
His early life was a horror story that no twelve-year-old child should have been forced to endure.
Editing of this story is nearly perfect and sentence structure is good considering the main character is Chilean and speaks broken English.
Development of the main characters is thorough. A clear picture is painted of each main player
Details are broad brushed with few specifics. But they are enough to carry the story.
Research of the Chilean regime during the span of the story is evident.
The plot is dark, gritty, twisted and full of surprises.
The writing style is a bit wordy due to the translation to English and relies on the emotional aspect of the characters which is presented in great detail.
The story contains cursing, talk of torture, and hints of sexual intercourse. None of these are graphic.
Diego Alandia's portion of the Alicanto is presented as a person who's first language is Spanish speaking in non-native English. The Alicanto's portion is much easier to follow.
I was swept up in The Alicanto and highly recommend it. But be assured it is not your typical crime story; it provides insight into two different characters with surprising similarities.
This review was provided in exchange for a free book.
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